Posted by Classic Man on January 19, 2010, 6:22 pm
Hi.
I wanted you to see my new Garden Design site and and say what do you
think about him.
Check it:
http://free.7host05.com/Smooth10/Home.htm
Posted by David E. Ross on January 19, 2010, 10:26 pm
On 1/19/2010 3:22 PM, Classic Man wrote:
> Hi.
> I wanted you to see my new Garden Design site and and say what do you
> think about him.
> Check it:
> http://free.7host05.com/Smooth10/Home.htm
267 XHTML errors! Some browsers might have trouble viewing this. Some
search engines might have trouble indexing it.
You are trying to display some eight images, all of them GIF files. But
none of them display. I traced the URI for one of them; it was 404.
The language seems strange. For example, "grassplot" instead of "lawn",
"spices garden" instead of "herb garden". In what region or nation is
the intended audience?
"the walkway throw the different spices" The correct word is "through",
not "throw".
"Citrus trees on the other hand are not for playing but they can give us
tasty juices like orange, grapefruit, mango and more..." Mango is not a
citrus.
--
David E. Ross
Climate: California Mediterranean
Sunset Zone: 21 -- interior Santa Monica Mountains with some ocean
influence (USDA 10a, very close to Sunset Zone 19)
Gardening diary at <http://www.rossde.com/garden/diary>
Posted by David Hare-Scott on January 19, 2010, 10:40 pm
Classic Man wrote:
> Hi.
> I wanted you to see my new Garden Design site and and say what do you
> think about him.
> Check it:
> http://free.7host05.com/Smooth10/Home.htm
I suppose that English is not your first language. You need to get somebody
with better writing skills to make it more readable and to use the correct
terms.
On the design page many topics were not mentioned and those that were
covered were very thin. It was hardly worth reading. There are also some
generalisations that I don't agree with and some stuff is just plain wrong.
Mangos are not citrus trees and you cannot plant every kind of tree that you
like in your garden unless they suit the climate.
The page on tools also made a number of rather doubtful statements. I never
expected to be told that aerator shoes were "must have" items. If this is
your idea of a marketing campaign it is as puny as your understanding of
design. I stopped reading after that.
You don't know enough about gardening to be giving advice or making useful
recommendations.
David
Posted by gardengal on January 25, 2010, 12:24 pm
> Classic Man wrote:
> > Hi.
> > I wanted you to see my new Garden Design site and and say what do you
> > think about him.
> > Check it:
> >http://free.7host05.com/Smooth10/Home.htm
> I suppose that English is not your first language. You need to get somebody
> with better writing skills to make it more readable and to use the correct
> terms.
> On the design page many topics were not mentioned and those that were
> covered were very thin. It was hardly worth reading. There are also some
> generalisations that I don't agree with and some stuff is just plain wrong.
> Mangos are not citrus trees and you cannot plant every kind of tree that you
> like in your garden unless they suit the climate.
> The page on tools also made a number of rather doubtful statements. I never
> expected to be told that aerator shoes were "must have" items. If this is
> your idea of a marketing campaign it is as puny as your understanding of
> design. I stopped reading after that.
> You don't know enough about gardening to be giving advice or making useful
> recommendations.
> David
As a professional landscape designer myself, I have to agree with the
above - there is little to no substance on your site. Certainly not
enough information to help anyone to design or plan their own garden.
And too many errors to be credible. Not an impressive effort at all
and not a site I'd bother with in the future.
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> I wanted you to see my new Garden Design site and and say what do you
> think about him.
> Check it:
> http://free.7host05.com/Smooth10/Home.htm